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9.【2017·山东菏泽市一模】
有没有想过给自己写信，尤其是给将来的自己写信。请用英语给五年后的自己写封信，信的内容包括以下三个方面： 1.写信的目的；
2.给五年后的你一些忠告； 3.如何看待五年后的你。 注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear myself,
Yours,
Me
【答案】Dear myself,
I have been confused for a long time，neglecting to think about the future. Escaping from the future sounds abnormal.If one can not face the future how can he face the reality? Thus I decide to write this letter to you- myself, five years later.
First of all,I want to give some suggestions.Learning's light shall never dim in your life for no one can survive in this fast changing world without learning. And remember:health is wealth.One can not abandon any kind of sport. Also,parents should be your first concern and deserve to be loved forever.
BesidesJ would like to remind you of keeping your spirits up, which are the basis of your life.
5 years later,wow. Now you are reading this letter in front of Beijing Tian:anmen Square.You will be working in Beijing after graduation,being an excellent translator or an energetic teacher.
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Yours, Me
【范文亮点】
1. 范文采取了非谓语动词作状语（I have been confused for a long time，neglecting to think about the future.）（You will be working in Beijing after graduation,being an excellent translator or an energetic teacher.）和非限定性定语从句（BesidesJ would like to remind you of keeping your spirits up, which are the basis of your life.）等句式。
2. 文章采用了dim；keep up；basis；fast-changing等高级单词或短语。采用了First of all，Besides等过渡衔接词。
10.【2017·山东潍坊市实验中学二模】
假如你是新华中学学生李华，在最近举行的市高中生英语口语大赛中获得了一等奖。某英语报社邀请你写一篇稿件，介绍你练习英语口语的经验。稿件内容如下： (1) 树立自信，克服羞怯心理； (2) 多参加英语角活动； (3) 多看英语新闻（如CCTV-9）
注意：1.词数：100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
I'm Li Hua from Xinghua Middle School. _________________________________
【答案】I'm Li Hua from Xinghua Middle School. Now I'd like to share my experience in practicing oral English. Firstly, I'm always confident and brave. I seize every opportunity to speak, not afraid of making mistakes which may embarrass me. I also find it of great benefit to take part in English corners, where I make many friends. By talking with them, my oral English has improved a lot. Finally, some English programs like CCTV-9 contribute to the progress in my speaking ability. Through this channel, not only am I kept informed of the current events going on both at home and abroad, I also learn the standard pronunciation and intonation by repeated imitation. Practice makes perfect, as the saying goes. Our hard work will finally be rewarded.
高
【名师点睛】
本文内容齐全，布局合理，文中使用高级句子。I seize every opportunity to speak, not afraid of making mistakes which may embarrass me.形容词性短语作伴随状语，同时句中运用which引导的限制性定语从句；I also find it of great benefit to take part in English corners, where I make many friends.此句中it作形式宾语，动词不定式作真正的宾语，同时句中where引导非限制性定语从句；Through this channel, not only am I kept informed of the current events going on both at home and abroad, I also learn the standard pronunciation and intonation by repeated imitation.句中not only…but also的部分倒装堪称经典；Practice makes perfect, as the saying goes.as引导的非限制性定语从句和名句完美结合。 11.【2017·贵州省黔东南州高考模拟】
假如你是李华，今年春节去美国旅游度假一周。你的美国朋友Luke招待了你。 请给他写一封信，表示感谢。要点如下： 1．玩得很开心； 2．谢谢他的招待； 3．邀请其来中国旅游。 注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。 【答案】Dear Luke,
How are you doing these days? With the deepest gratitude, I am writing to you to express my thanks for your hospitality when I was traveling in America. You know how hard it is for a foreigner to travel in a foreign country alone. I couldn’t imagine what my vacation would be without your help. I enjoyed myself very much. I will be glad if you can come to China to visit me. I hope we can still keep in touch with each other! I will forever remember the valued time with you. Thank you again and wish everything goes well. Your sincerely,
高
Lin Hua
【亮点说明】
文章使用了非常好的短语和句子给文章增色，如含有宾语从句和形式主语it的句子You know how hard it is for a foreigner to travel in a foreign country alone.；虚拟语气I couldn’t imagine what my vacation would be without your help.；enjoyed myself玩的开心；keep in touch with保持联系。
12.【2017·吉林省实验中学第五次模拟】
假如你是张萌，在刚结束的寒假里，你作为学校的交换生 (exchange student) 去美国Wilson Middle School学习，期间你结交了很多朋友，增进了对美国文化的了解。现请你代表你的学校，根据下列内容要点，给Wilson Middle School的校长写一封感谢信。 内容要点： 自我简介；
表示感谢（你的收获）； 希望多举办这样的活动； 欢迎该校师生来你校参观
注意： 1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Headmaster,
My name is Zhang Meng____________________________________________________
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高