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第一课时 如何写好并列句
并列句就是由并列连词或分号连接两个分句而组成的句子。 并列句的分类 1．联合关系
由并列连词and或not only...but also...连接的两个分句。 Work hard and you will succeed sooner or later. 努力工作，迟早你会成功的。
(2013·天津卷满分作文)First，my English is very good and I’m open-minded and warm-hearted，so I’m getting well with everyone.
首先，我的英语很好，而且我性格外向、有一副热心肠，因此我和每个人都相处得很好。 (2013·江西卷满分作文)It not only gave us a chance to get close to nature，but also gave us relaxation from our study.
它不仅给了我们接近大自然的机会，而且能让我们在学习之余得到放松。 2．转折关系
多用连词but，yet，while等连接两个分句。
(2013·四川卷书面表达)Good habits always lead to high efficiency，while bad ones lead to the opposite.
好的习惯经常使得效率增高，而不好的习惯效果恰恰相反。
(2012·陕西卷书面表达)Ms Li spent a wonderful time with us，but we know that we cannot thank her enough for all her hard work and guidance.李老师和我们度过了一段快乐的时光，但我们知道对她所有的付出和指导再怎么感谢也不为过。
3．选择关系
主要由连词or(或者；否则)，either...or...(要么??要么??)，otherwise(要不然)，not...but...不是??而是??等连词连接。
(2013·新课标全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)People can either give them as gifts or hang them in their houses.
人们可以把他们当做礼物，或者挂在自己的房子里。
(2013·重庆卷满分作文)So，from now on，let’s not waste our time on unimportant things but have a heart-to-heart chat with our parents once in a while.
因此，从现在起，让我们不要在一些不重要的事情上浪费时间，而要经常与我们的父母进行面对面的交流。
4．因果关系
多用连词for和so连接。
He told me to do it，so I did it.
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他让我这样做，于是我就这样做了。 5．时间关系
由并列连词when连接两个分句，表示“就在这时突然??”。
(2013·浙江卷满分作文)Last Monday，I was walking in the street when I suddenly saw an old man fall off his bicycle.
上周一，我正在街上散步，这时突然看到一位老人从自行车上摔了下来。
Ⅰ.用适当的连词填空
1．Stand over there and you’ll be able to see the oil painting better. 2．Start out right away，or/otherwise you’ll miss the first train. 3．I worked hard at English and devoted all my spare time to practicing it，but I failed to pass the mid-term examination.
4．About 9∶00 last night，I was busy preparing for my tomorrow’s test when suddenly loud noises came into my room.
5．Half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols，while 48% of the boys favor sports stars.
6．Not_only can students improve their writing ability in this way but_also they can strengthen their self-confidence.
Ⅱ.能力提升
1．用并列句翻译下面的句子
(1)前门大街是一条步行街，但是你可以乘当当车去看电影。 Qianmen_Street_is_a_pedestrian_street
but_you_can_enjoy_the_trolley_cars_to_go_to_see _a_movie_in_the_theatres.
(2)这条著名大街的历史可以上溯到600年前，共约800米长。
The_famous_street_dates_back_to_six_hundred_years_ago_and_has_a_length_of_about_800_meters.
(3)另外，它也是一条商业街，街道两边分布着300多家商店。
It_is_also_a_commercial_street，and_lined_with_more_than_300_shops. 2．选用以上句子组建一篇介绍前门大街的小短文(适当加入连词、调整句式结构)。 参考范文
Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street，but you can enjoy the trolley cars to go to see a movie in the theatres.First of all，the famous street dates back to six hundred years ago and has a length of about 800 meters.It is also a commercial
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street，which is lined with more than 300 shops.
第二课时 如何写好复合句
复合句包括名词性从句(主语从句、表语从句、宾语从句、同位语从句)，定语从句和状语从句。
一、定语从句 [经典例句]
①(2013·新课标全国卷Ⅰ满分作文)You know，my uncle Li Ming is going to the city where you live to attend an international meeting.
你知道，我的叔叔李明要去你居住的城市参加一个国际会议。
②(2013·湖北卷满分作文)I often think about the times when I have felt hurt and insulted by rude marks from strangers and sometimes even from acquaintances.
我经常想起被陌生人的言语伤害和侮辱的时候，甚至有时是来自熟悉的人。
③(2013·福建卷满分作文)A sailor who has experienced no storm will never become an excellent sailor.
没经历过暴风雨的水手永远不会成为一名优秀的水手。
④(山东卷满分作文)I would visit some museums which should not be missed to widen my horizons as well as enrich my knowledge.
我总是会参观一些博物馆，这些博物馆对于拓宽视野、丰富知识来说是不应错过的。 [写法指导]
定语从句是比较难掌握而又是学生在写作中喜欢尝试的复杂句，因此在写作时可采用“三步法”：
第一步：写出两个简单句。
第二步：在一个简单句中找出一个要修饰的词汇，这个词在两个简单句中都有。 第三步：把另一个简单句改成定语从句，要特别注意引导词的选择。
(2013·辽宁卷书面表达)人们可以一边吃月饼一边赏月，月饼是这个节日的特
殊食品。
第一步：写出两个简单句。
①People can enjoy the moon while eating moon cakes. ②They are the special food for the festival. 第二步：在句①中找出一个要修饰的词汇：moon cakes。
第三步：用句②充当定语从句，moon cakes为先行词指物，句②中的they指代moon cakes
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且在句中作主语，故用which引导非限制性定语从句。
People can enjoy the moon while eating moon cakes，which are the special food for this festival.
[练一练]
Ⅰ.把下列每组题中的两个简单句合并为一个含有定语从句的复合句。1．I’ve always longed for the days.I will be able to be independent then.
I’ve_always_longed_for_the_days_when_I_will_be_able_to_be_independent. 2．I have a friend.Her father is an engineer. I_have_a_friend_whose_father_is_an_engineer.
3．They planted the trees.The trees didn’t need much water. They_planted_the_trees_that/which_didn’t_need_much_water. 4．This is the best method.It can be used against pollution. This_is_the_best_method_that_can_be_used_against_pollution.
5．They sent the elderly some fruits，cleaned the rooms and had a good chat with them.The elderly always feel lonely.
They_sent_the_elderly_who_always_feel_lonely_some_fruitscleaned_the_rooms_and_had_ a_good_chat_with_them.
Ⅱ.用适当的关系词填空
1．(2013·广东卷满分作文)Those who do simple and ordinary jobs are also promoting the development of the society.
2．(2013·广东卷满分作文)As we all know，cleaning streets is one of the hardest work.
3．(2013·四川卷书面表达)My teacher advised me to repeat the materials several times and read them aloud，which they think will help improve my memory.
4．I will never forget the days when we worked in the small town.
5．She was educated at Beijing University，after which she went to have her advanced study abroad.
二、名词性从句 [经典例句]
①(2013·陕西卷满分作文)I think that it’s our duty to help parents do some housework.
我认为帮助父母做家务是我们的职责。(宾语从句)
②(2013·北京卷满分作文)I took pride in what I had done in the absence of my father.
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