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雅思小作文改写那点事儿
雅思小作文如果读图没问题并且作文囊括所有信息,就可以拿到比较理想的分数吗?No,No,No!数据类作文也好,图片作文也好都容易落入重复语言的俗套。毕竟数据就在哪里,翻来覆去,流程步骤就是那样,循规蹈矩,地图题好不到哪去,无非就是变来变去。不过我们还是可以“以万变应不变”把小作文写活起来。
(1) 改写题目作为开头段(以OG Test 1为例)
题目:
The chart below gives information on the percentage of British peoplegiving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.
改变从现在开始:
1. the chart——the bar chart
2. gives——illustrates
3. information——statistical information
4. on关于——regarding
5. percentage——diverse proportion
6. British——UK
7. people giving money to charity——people who gave money tocharity——donating money to charity
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8. age range——different age groups
9. for the years 1990 and 2010——in two respective years: 1990 and 2010
见证奇迹的时刻:
The bar chart illustrates statistical information regarding the diverseproportion of people in UK donating money to charity by different age groups intwo respective years: 1990 and 2010.
让世界看到你的改变:亲自动手DIY你自己的开头段
练习1:
The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000,*20.., and future projections for 2025. (OG Test 4)
练习2:
The pie chart below shows the online shopping sales for retail sectors inNew Zealand in 2003 and 2013.
练习3:
The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areasof crime in Newport city centre from 2003-2012.
(2) 让主体段摆脱单调从改变主语开始:(剑4满分考官范文给我们的启示):
The table gives a breakdown of the different types of family who wereliving in poverty in Australia in 1999.
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On average, 11% of all households, comprising almost two million people,were in this position. However, those consisting of only one parent or a singleadult had almost double this proportion of poor people, with 21% and 19%respectively.
Couples generally tended to be better off, with lower poverty levels forcouples without children (7%) than those with children (12%). It is noticeablethat for both types of household with children, a higher than average proportionwere living in poverty at this time.
Older people were generally less likely to be poor, though once again thetrend favoured elderly couples (only 4%) rather than single elderly people(6%).
Overall the table suggests that households of single adults and those withchildren were more likely to be living in poverty than those consisting ofcouples.
在文章里面画出所有句子的主语我们不难发现,主语可以是数字,代词,题中名词,比重(或趋势)词。那么我们也可以分别用到各类主语来变化我们的句式哦!
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